Score: 1

"What youtube video?"

submission: Wii love Brawl comedy

date: August 1, 2008

I bet it's traced then.

Score: 4

"More detail."

submission: MAX Tutorial 1 (buttons)

date: October 1, 2007

You really have to explain every step, and making a box over the circle? You have to select it, right?

Step by step, with pictures, then it's a perfect tutorial. Good luck with your next one.

Score: 7

"Not too bad!"

submission: Three:Escape part-a

date: October 1, 2007

Very nice colouring and emotions, and the characters don't look the same - well, not all of them. That's a good thing.

But what you should improve on first is active poses, especially in fights. When your characters throw a punch, make them express the effort, and show how their body moves - with simple characters, that isn't so hard. I'm still practicing that. But practice makes perfect.

Good luck, and looking out for more of your stuff.