Age/Gender: 19, Male
Location: Ommoord, NL.
Job: Artist.
Learning to use flash... will post stuff soon.
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Flash Reviews: 26
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I bet it's traced then.
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You really have to explain every step, and making a box over the circle? You have to select it, right?
Step by step, with pictures, then it's a perfect tutorial. Good luck with your next one.
Author's Response:
THANKYOU i have your review in mind
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Very nice colouring and emotions, and the characters don't look the same - well, not all of them. That's a good thing.
But what you should improve on first is active poses, especially in fights. When your characters throw a punch, make them express the effort, and show how their body moves - with simple characters, that isn't so hard. I'm still practicing that. But practice makes perfect.
Good luck, and looking out for more of your stuff.
Author's Response:
thx ill be sure to imporve in part b!
thx for the review
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What can use is improving is the blood, and the details of the fangs. Make them look scary, and the eyes too. Those two are really important. Besides that, great preview, especially the music made it scary.
Author's Response:
Thanks, I'll work on that!
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Where's the music? Where's the gangsters? Where's the quality in this video?
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Funny, but just a bit too simple, still. Maybe more stuff in the background, more moving action.
Author's Response:
yeh im gna do stuff to bakky
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I love it. xD Faved.
Stuff like this deserves to be on the front page.
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I laughed my ass off. Awesome, and faved.
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Hilarious, and so random. I love it. Maybe make it longer though?
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With an ICP track in the background, I would have given you two more stars. You gotta keep the "people" happy, dude! This gets boring after a minute.
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